Sunday, January 9, 2011

Heartbeat

so. this isnt exactly what i had in mind.

and the scheme for it actually making sense is only in my head

buuut it's as done as its gonna get tonight.

thanks for the people that helped me with the heartbeat :D

and sorry for being depressing...

oh and only the people tagged can read this so if you think i should shoow a certain person lemme know so i can add them to the privacy thing..

and. the 2nd to last line doesn't follow the scheme. cause i said so.

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Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

heartbeat

of a boy

not quite

a man

Barely

alive

His death

At hand

Heart races

Time slows

He knows

Its over

And yet

He runs

for one

last moment

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Bleeds out

Onto

the dark

dirty pavement

his home

not far

is where

he heads

to see

his family

one last

sad time

no chance

for life

he sees

in sight

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

and yet

he fights

throughout

the night

and from

the mist

he sees

his house

a final

bright spectre

to end

his life

heart slows

face drains

he's all

most home

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

the steps

he sees

too far

to reach

he never

makes it

to the

front door

he dies

ten feet

from his

own home

young mans

lifes end

before

his prime

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

Ba-boomh

ba-boomh

the sound

ripped from

this boys

young soul

taken by

a bullet

in to

his skull

not meant

for him

innocent

bystander

potential

destroyed

before

it began

senseless

violence

caused

his end

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